tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post2656485017308990904..comments2023-05-14T03:11:35.098-07:00Comments on The Great Consolidation: 09-15-2044: Truth ExerciseGavin Castletonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17110045100562010542noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post-55135976275710362292009-08-07T01:20:39.307-07:002009-08-07T01:20:39.307-07:00hey hey. No need for name calling... Incapacitant...hey hey. No need for name calling... Incapacitant is entitled to his opinion (why he wouldn't wait to post it until <i>after</i> the effects of the acid had worn off is beyond me).Gavin Castletonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17110045100562010542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post-73403347708454492202009-08-05T07:14:53.570-07:002009-08-05T07:14:53.570-07:00Dude, Gavin is official now. Dorks are arguing gr...Dude, Gavin is official now. Dorks are arguing grammar on his blog.<br /><br />I am better than this, but I can't help myself.<br /><br />Incapacitant: Your reconjugation of the verbs "be" and "have" has nothing to do with verb tense nor "flow", dipshit. "Is" and "has" were completely incorrect when describing the plural noun "breaks". And you still need to work in some kind of preposition between "reason" and "existing" for your critique to make any sense at all.Coryhttp://corycline.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post-25590801094419104992009-08-03T01:20:12.790-07:002009-08-03T01:20:12.790-07:00incapacitant: he's not really a writer, he'...incapacitant: he's not really a writer, he's a greek chef. And you aren't really a writing professor, you're a child.Jacksonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post-9792437441921673542009-08-01T23:59:14.745-07:002009-08-01T23:59:14.745-07:00See Cory, the thing about talking about literature...See Cory, the thing about talking about literature (which is a huge compliment given what Gavin wrote), is that one should always talk in present tense (perfect present if possible) so I don't really see what you're trying to get at.<br /><br />Re-reading the sentence though, it would probably flow better as "The seemingly random breaks from the mood of the story are very annoying and have no reason existing (!)."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post-40399138118853503472009-06-18T06:51:07.024-07:002009-06-18T06:51:07.024-07:00"and has no reason existing"? Seriously..."and has no reason existing"? Seriously? Dude, proofread your scathing critique before you click submit.Coryhttp://corycline.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post-12469319919271135352009-06-17T00:35:17.830-07:002009-06-17T00:35:17.830-07:00There's really no reason why it should take an...There's really no reason why it should take anyone who considers themselves a writer that long to prove such as simple and obvious to anyone who's tried a relationship.<br /><br />The seemingly random breaks from the mood of the story is really annoying and has no reason existing (!).<br /><br />There's never a reason to use words like "pontificate" unless you're tyring to sound like a dick who thinks they know proper diction.<br /><br />It's kinda sad you don't have enough faith in your writing to feel as though you don't need visual aids.<br /><br />Yeah, try harder man.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post-3047473830556678412009-05-31T16:31:30.231-07:002009-05-31T16:31:30.231-07:00#23 made me blow snot out my nose.#23 made me blow snot out my nose.Coryhttp://www.thesocialseasonmusic.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post-31417223353524675772009-05-30T10:55:54.137-07:002009-05-30T10:55:54.137-07:00I wonder how many people really do worry about you...I wonder how many people really do worry about you.....I laugh at certain things, but other things scare the hell out of me....good work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post-88284757704043844902009-05-30T09:04:59.238-07:002009-05-30T09:04:59.238-07:00I found this to be truly heartbreaking, and yet I ...I found this to be truly heartbreaking, and yet I so badly want to read more.md imaginghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14154784391938598647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post-12477349754065745302009-05-29T19:13:49.190-07:002009-05-29T19:13:49.190-07:00Thank you for continuing this story.Thank you for continuing this story.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14978688024066678597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post-82306111024163792932009-05-29T17:59:43.236-07:002009-05-29T17:59:43.236-07:00bravo big guy. pretty interesting slice of things...bravo big guy. pretty interesting slice of things. #22, fucking ouch.Ryan Dutkusnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5521359318319157548.post-28911174847528569332009-05-29T17:30:26.366-07:002009-05-29T17:30:26.366-07:00This is my favorite future post to date. Seriousl...This is my favorite future post to date. Seriously. I don't know how you come up with this stuff. It's like you're from the future, are you? Seriously, are you from the future?<br /><br />Write a god damn book.Andrew Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11987161973871459760noreply@blogger.com